tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post3469594788989729890..comments2024-03-27T00:04:45.084+00:00Comments on Romance that's 'Out of This World' : #WeekendWritingWarriors -Ten Sentence Sunday - An introduction to Earth Colony NiflheimHywela Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-15267815219028835942017-08-23T19:31:55.864+00:002017-08-23T19:31:55.864+00:00It's such fun world-building, and you've d...It's such fun world-building, and you've done a good job so farSue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-960791116023216752017-08-22T22:35:43.783+00:002017-08-22T22:35:43.783+00:00Oops, sorry Aurora, I could have sworn I'd rep...Oops, sorry Aurora, I could have sworn I'd replied! Thanks, I'm so glad you like the 'tinkling', I was trying to convey a sweet voice in his mind that wasn't quite like one being spoken.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-89725083168633645932017-08-22T22:30:47.586+00:002017-08-22T22:30:47.586+00:00LoL - you're right, it hasn't been easy fo...LoL - you're right, it hasn't been easy for Vidarh and things are only going to get tougher - this is just the start! Thanks so much for coming by.<br />Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-22749252517568970122017-08-22T03:23:58.578+00:002017-08-22T03:23:58.578+00:00Doesn't sound like it's been all that grea...Doesn't sound like it's been all that great of a journey as it is. Somehow I don't think the rest of it not being easy is good news, even if he does have a guide.PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-8862184801870180142017-08-21T12:10:08.522+00:002017-08-21T12:10:08.522+00:00Aw thanks, Nancy, so glad you enjoyed the snippet....Aw thanks, Nancy, so glad you enjoyed the snippet.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-14112929110296537492017-08-21T12:02:16.040+00:002017-08-21T12:02:16.040+00:00Thanks so much,Alexis!Thanks so much,Alexis!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-39356862416731904812017-08-21T01:53:12.601+00:002017-08-21T01:53:12.601+00:00That's a wonderful beginning. it drew me right...That's a wonderful beginning. it drew me right in.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-33315390335010832172017-08-21T00:28:54.237+00:002017-08-21T00:28:54.237+00:00Thanks Diane, so glad you like it.Thanks Diane, so glad you like it.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-26370000784772975712017-08-20T23:56:21.809+00:002017-08-20T23:56:21.809+00:00Thanks Kimberly, this was such a fun world to imag...Thanks Kimberly, this was such a fun world to imagine!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-3564717408668104802017-08-20T23:42:57.663+00:002017-08-20T23:42:57.663+00:00Thanks Veronica!Thanks Veronica!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-15299168192537761622017-08-20T23:38:56.598+00:002017-08-20T23:38:56.598+00:00Thanks Amy, glad you liked it!Thanks Amy, glad you liked it!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-57221981388528083312017-08-20T23:37:07.630+00:002017-08-20T23:37:07.630+00:00What a lovely comment, thank you so much Charmaine...What a lovely comment, thank you so much Charmaine xHywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-46324481465633152302017-08-20T23:20:47.783+00:002017-08-20T23:20:47.783+00:00Thanks so much, Marcia, so glad you like the excer...Thanks so much, Marcia, so glad you like the excerpt - and apologies for miscounting my sentences. I've updated the excerpt with some creative punctuation which I hope has solved the problem and I'll try to count more accurately in future :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-29971258321284230682017-08-20T22:25:18.227+00:002017-08-20T22:25:18.227+00:00Intriguing snippet, Hywela. :)Intriguing snippet, Hywela. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-83344868572417677162017-08-20T20:34:12.887+00:002017-08-20T20:34:12.887+00:00I like this, Hywelalyn!! So much is conveyed here...I like this, Hywelalyn!! So much is conveyed here - a sense of setting and tension, and a taste of the mysterious world your bringing us into. Can't wait to read more.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-6857074132335895972017-08-20T16:26:01.149+00:002017-08-20T16:26:01.149+00:00The tinkle of bells struck me, too, in a good way....The tinkle of bells struck me, too, in a good way. No danger, at least not yet. I love the way you've set the scene. Anxious to read more.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-21578597860873356672017-08-20T16:18:04.977+00:002017-08-20T16:18:04.977+00:00I wonder what lies ahead? Nice tension and world-b...I wonder what lies ahead? Nice tension and world-building in this short snippet.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-13194839706639154532017-08-20T16:13:31.823+00:002017-08-20T16:13:31.823+00:00Love your world-building.Love your world-building.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-71296053351113378522017-08-20T15:50:05.375+00:002017-08-20T15:50:05.375+00:00Interesting snippet, loved hearing more about the ...Interesting snippet, loved hearing more about the backstory! Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-4970892016066844512017-08-20T15:18:19.045+00:002017-08-20T15:18:19.045+00:00Great intro! Great intro! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-81832371351339616682017-08-20T14:06:25.993+00:002017-08-20T14:06:25.993+00:00I like your premise and your descriptions here! As...I like your premise and your descriptions here! As a long-time fantasy fan, I like the details of the pony struggling against the wind and snow, and the telepathy. Gets me interested right away! <br /><br />As a moderator, I do need to ask you to keep excerpts to 10 sentences or less. Thanks for joining our blog hop, and hope to see you next week! Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-24163256714440135062017-08-20T14:01:30.402+00:002017-08-20T14:01:30.402+00:00Splendid snippet as usual. You write so well.Splendid snippet as usual. You write so well.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-2661279841454986502017-08-20T13:20:08.900+00:002017-08-20T13:20:08.900+00:00I liked the mental contact - tinkle like tiny bell...I liked the mental contact - tinkle like tiny bells. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-79697879395686766052017-08-20T13:09:34.256+00:002017-08-20T13:09:34.256+00:00Hi Jessica - it's not easy that's for sure...Hi Jessica - it's not easy that's for sure! :) Thanks for stopping by!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-29186785784308053202017-08-20T00:41:42.634+00:002017-08-20T00:41:42.634+00:00I wonder what is in store for them during the rest...I wonder what is in store for them during the rest of the journey. Intriguing!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com