tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post8058859853553426095..comments2024-03-27T00:04:45.084+00:00Comments on Romance that's 'Out of This World' : #WeWriWar, Sunday Snippets: Beloved Enemy - Cat needs to find out what's going onHywela Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-52411961420996802022017-12-14T04:31:12.995+00:002017-12-14T04:31:12.995+00:00That is NOT a good time to be fighting with her ha...That is NOT a good time to be fighting with her hair. Makes me hope she gets everything under control soon. Lots of good details to pump up the tension!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-81637681291737704542017-12-12T15:04:35.128+00:002017-12-12T15:04:35.128+00:00Great descriptive scene. Intense. Great descriptive scene. Intense. Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-37961104441054633082017-12-12T14:12:10.060+00:002017-12-12T14:12:10.060+00:00Thanks so much, Karen!Thanks so much, Karen!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-4880064733831991532017-12-12T14:11:48.253+00:002017-12-12T14:11:48.253+00:00Thanks Christiane. I enjoyed writing this scene!Thanks Christiane. I enjoyed writing this scene!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-72015960994961821152017-12-12T14:11:17.132+00:002017-12-12T14:11:17.132+00:00Thanks so much, Elaine!Thanks so much, Elaine!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-13936465720624384352017-12-12T14:11:00.706+00:002017-12-12T14:11:00.706+00:00Thanks Kim - that's good to hear!Thanks Kim - that's good to hear!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-10026859857087161022017-12-12T14:10:38.935+00:002017-12-12T14:10:38.935+00:00Thanks Amy, glad you liked it.Thanks Amy, glad you liked it.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-62228191629294676322017-12-12T14:09:49.128+00:002017-12-12T14:09:49.128+00:00Thanks Botanist - I think Cat is about to find out...Thanks Botanist - I think Cat is about to find out!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-16150055395645000062017-12-12T14:09:27.851+00:002017-12-12T14:09:27.851+00:00Thanks so much, Nancy!Thanks so much, Nancy!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-86482749493988739172017-12-12T14:08:58.973+00:002017-12-12T14:08:58.973+00:00Thanks Jenna - I was trying to find a way of showi...Thanks Jenna - I was trying to find a way of showing she had red hair, without 'telling' the reaader. Glad it seems to have worked.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-16076471779104985642017-12-12T14:06:54.563+00:002017-12-12T14:06:54.563+00:00Thanks so much Trin!
Thanks so much Trin! <br />Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-79902362122507882262017-12-12T14:06:05.619+00:002017-12-12T14:06:05.619+00:00Thanks Veronica, glad you enjoyed this bit - Cat h...Thanks Veronica, glad you enjoyed this bit - Cat has very unruly hair and the Robigan wind doesn't help at all! :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-56736896881841939252017-12-11T02:49:48.063+00:002017-12-11T02:49:48.063+00:00Intense scene! Great imagery. Intense scene! Great imagery. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-61466573356257483422017-12-11T02:20:12.321+00:002017-12-11T02:20:12.321+00:00Great feeling of being there. Well done!Great feeling of being there. Well done!Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-86784506196865688742017-12-11T00:39:50.180+00:002017-12-11T00:39:50.180+00:00That's a great description. You definitely put...That's a great description. You definitely put us in the scene.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-41600541273743444462017-12-11T00:17:34.717+00:002017-12-11T00:17:34.717+00:00Lol Ed, 'course not, you know I love you! But ...Lol Ed, 'course not, you know I love you! But last week you said the thing missing from the graphic I used was as sign saying 'Welcome to Hell' (Because of the smell of sulphur etc.) so I thought I'd do one! :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-71823019831593640382017-12-11T00:12:06.992+00:002017-12-11T00:12:06.992+00:00And, uh, why is the Welcome to Hell sign specially...And, uh, why is the Welcome to Hell sign specially for me? Is this your way of telling me where to go? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-46382530795813354982017-12-10T21:55:16.102+00:002017-12-10T21:55:16.102+00:00wonderful description. Felt like I was there.wonderful description. Felt like I was there.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-47549093919486728492017-12-10T17:29:58.247+00:002017-12-10T17:29:58.247+00:00Great descriptive snippet! Great descriptive snippet! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-22926291879408888272017-12-10T17:10:08.940+00:002017-12-10T17:10:08.940+00:00Good descriptions of the setting. Curious to find ...Good descriptions of the setting. Curious to find out what's going on over there.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-36904642465855352552017-12-10T17:01:40.302+00:002017-12-10T17:01:40.302+00:00Nice scene, Lyn! Visual and . . . gritty.Nice scene, Lyn! Visual and . . . gritty.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-2855985982575625512017-12-10T16:47:17.382+00:002017-12-10T16:47:17.382+00:00Wonderfully descriptive. My favorite line was &quo...Wonderfully descriptive. My favorite line was "Like a dark red mist, the unbound hair whipped across her face, blurring her vision." Fabulous!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-13931550553343491652017-12-10T16:18:55.345+00:002017-12-10T16:18:55.345+00:00Great line Hywela ."She cursed as it snatched...Great line Hywela ."She cursed as it snatched several long strands of her hair from the scarf that struggled to restrain it at the nape of her neck. " theglobaldig.blogspot.comTrin Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01649273594176899623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-7953775284531775302017-12-10T15:37:23.491+00:002017-12-10T15:37:23.491+00:00Vivid description of the wind and the issues with ...Vivid description of the wind and the issues with her hair! A nice touch...can't wait to learn more about this battle she's sneaking up on. Great snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-39970173375766629012017-12-10T09:42:34.391+00:002017-12-10T09:42:34.391+00:00Well there's quite a thicket of them, so hopef...Well there's quite a thicket of them, so hopefully she'll be OK. Ed.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.com