tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post9093427158488182605..comments2024-03-27T00:04:45.084+00:00Comments on Romance that's 'Out of This World' : Weekend Writing Warriors - #SundaySnippet - Beloved Enemy, The Destiny Trilogy Book 3 - Cat-landing!Hywela Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-48308957215313674522017-11-27T01:20:36.271+00:002017-11-27T01:20:36.271+00:00Thanks so much, Elaine!
Thanks so much, Elaine!<br />Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-5912907915242134932017-11-27T01:18:20.283+00:002017-11-27T01:18:20.283+00:00That's a great beginning for a story, and your...That's a great beginning for a story, and your description of the crash is good too. Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-15462737071263895742017-11-27T00:02:34.075+00:002017-11-27T00:02:34.075+00:00Thank you Melisse,hope you tune in next week for t...Thank you Melisse,hope you tune in next week for the next episode!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-10260918735737475972017-11-27T00:01:23.864+00:002017-11-27T00:01:23.864+00:00Thanks Christiane, glad you liked it.Thanks Christiane, glad you liked it.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-50277004995466605202017-11-26T23:59:52.417+00:002017-11-26T23:59:52.417+00:00Thanks for that, Ed. Yes, she doesn't trust an...Thanks for that, Ed. Yes, she doesn't trust anyone or anything very much, not even an A.I.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-25917525750099925642017-11-26T23:59:05.674+00:002017-11-26T23:59:05.674+00:00So glad you enjoyed it Veronica, always encouragin...So glad you enjoyed it Veronica, always encouraging if the first paragraph passes muster!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-39789294951078217962017-11-26T23:58:24.781+00:002017-11-26T23:58:24.781+00:00Thanks Alexis - it takes more than a bumpy landing...Thanks Alexis - it takes more than a bumpy landing to phase our Cat! :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-54171447193767142282017-11-26T23:57:48.740+00:002017-11-26T23:57:48.740+00:00Thanks Amy!Thanks Amy!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-72231339805505805942017-11-26T23:57:46.711+00:002017-11-26T23:57:46.711+00:00Dangerous journey! Exciting start to an adventure....Dangerous journey! Exciting start to an adventure.Melissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17966187139488660702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-69890678615285101302017-11-26T23:57:28.842+00:002017-11-26T23:57:28.842+00:00Spot on, Botanist, her craft was badly damaged and...Spot on, Botanist, her craft was badly damaged and she was lucky to land it and escape in one piece.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-87263316473125616542017-11-26T23:56:47.793+00:002017-11-26T23:56:47.793+00:00True - more luck than judgement in this instance!True - more luck than judgement in this instance!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-55222001441732016332017-11-26T23:56:27.834+00:002017-11-26T23:56:27.834+00:00I'm pretty sure she won't. She probably re...I'm pretty sure she won't. She probably regards it as sinister, rather than peaceful! :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-20577033060363618492017-11-26T23:54:32.094+00:002017-11-26T23:54:32.094+00:00If she isn't this might be a very short story,...If she isn't this might be a very short story, LOL! Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-21106136800844950262017-11-26T23:53:06.323+00:002017-11-26T23:53:06.323+00:00Thanks Jess, yep, she is definitely lucky to have ...Thanks Jess, yep, she is definitely lucky to have survived - so far!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-29847867867086305452017-11-26T23:52:10.869+00:002017-11-26T23:52:10.869+00:00Thanks Jessica,I think she thinks that too! :)
Thanks Jessica,I think she thinks that too! :)<br />Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-65586131035711710182017-11-26T23:28:48.629+00:002017-11-26T23:28:48.629+00:00This scene certainly does come alive. Interesting ...This scene certainly does come alive. Interesting situation.Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-76806102237937091312017-11-26T20:01:18.680+00:002017-11-26T20:01:18.680+00:00Great details that make the scene come alive. It&#...Great details that make the scene come alive. It's very easy to visualize what's going on. Also, it's interesting that she doesn't quite trust the computer analysis of the air.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-267393078955446942017-11-26T18:18:42.923+00:002017-11-26T18:18:42.923+00:00Nice dramatic beginning to the tale! Enjoyed the e...Nice dramatic beginning to the tale! Enjoyed the excerpt :)Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-66339101978425226392017-11-26T17:45:04.516+00:002017-11-26T17:45:04.516+00:00This certainly grabbed my attention. She doesn'...This certainly grabbed my attention. She doesn't seemed phased by her crash landing though.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-47494538795680199102017-11-26T16:48:44.246+00:002017-11-26T16:48:44.246+00:00Great descriptions! Great descriptions! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-81807414486294399092017-11-26T16:30:53.964+00:002017-11-26T16:30:53.964+00:00Bumpy is about right! Got me curious about all sor...Bumpy is about right! Got me curious about all sorts of things, like how did she get here? Presumably her craft is already damaged else why the bumpy landing in the first place?Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-69482072549662418102017-11-26T16:26:28.892+00:002017-11-26T16:26:28.892+00:00Well, at least she didn't crash INTO anything....Well, at least she didn't crash INTO anything.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-21618943891388976082017-11-26T15:09:31.653+00:002017-11-26T15:09:31.653+00:00You brought us right in for the landing with you. ...You brought us right in for the landing with you. Hope she doesn't let the peaceful landscape fool her for long!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-18626714901716975212017-11-26T14:39:14.034+00:002017-11-26T14:39:14.034+00:00Wonderful description of their wild ride! And yes,...Wonderful description of their wild ride! And yes, that final line must give one pause--and hope she's right about the computer's analysis. Great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8090555908155604548.post-51742917047532425412017-11-26T12:29:18.136+00:002017-11-26T12:29:18.136+00:00Jessica is right about the landing. And that last ...Jessica is right about the landing. And that last line ... spectacular. Great snippet!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.com