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Terpsichore, muse of dance, is dancing near a waterfall in 5th century Wales, unaware that she is being observed. (Read last week's snippet HERE)
(As usual, some creative editing of punctuation and slight variation from published version to comply with 8-10 sentence rule)
Terpsichore, muse of dance, is dancing near a waterfall in 5th century Wales, unaware that she is being observed. (Read last week's snippet HERE)
(As usual, some creative editing of punctuation and slight variation from published version to comply with 8-10 sentence rule)
SNIPPET
Myrddin watched, enthralled, he'd never known anyone to dance as she did. The way she swivelled her hips had him mesmerized. Her voice was soft and clear, with a haunting quality, it reminded him of the musical bells of Maes Gwyddno, the civilization that now lay drowned beneath the sea. At times of danger, if one listened hard enough, one could hear the bells ringing from beneath the waves. Moreover, it may have been a trick of the light, but she seemed to radiate a soft glow, pure and shimmering. He shook his head in disbelief, he must be imagining it. He'd eaten nothing since dawn, this was surely a vision brought on by weakness from hunger.
Myrddin crept closer and a twig cracked underfoot. Before he could take cover, the beautiful dancer stood motionless. Her eyes, green as the depths of the ocean, looked directly into his.
BLURB
DANCING WITH FATE
Terpsichore and Myrddin face a deadly force that threatens to part them forever. Is she destined to lose the only man she has ever truly loved? Is there nothing she can do to save him? Finally, when all seems lost, in desperation she finds herself DANCING WITH FATE.
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Uh oh! He's been caught. I wonder what he'll do now after being so mesmerized.
ReplyDeleteLOL Jessica. I think he needs to do some smart thinking! :)
ReplyDeleteWow. Intriguing snippet. Love how he describes her singing--like bells beneath the waves. I think he's enthralled.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane - I think you're right! :)
DeleteI love this scene. Very romantic and so beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely comment, thank you Christiae x
DeleteUh oh, he's in trouble now. What happens next will be interesting, to say the least. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica!
DeleteI'm reminded of the hunter who glimpse goddess Diana bathing. She hunted him down!
ReplyDeleteYes - good job she's a muse and not a huntress, Ed! :)
DeleteWell - he's put his foot in it. What will she do now?
ReplyDeleteHe has rather hasn't he! See if he can get away with it, next week!
DeleteSuch a beautiful glimpse into his world!
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you christina!
DeleteAbsolutely breathtaking. Every week you transpose this writer to another world.
ReplyDeleteYou make my day Charmaine! Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying these snippets.
DeleteI loved that line about hearing the bells under the sea in times of danger. Gave me shivers.
ReplyDeleteThanks Elaine - that was based on an actual legend of a lost village beneath the sea near where I used to live in Wales
DeleteThis is wonderful! I enjoy the imagery. Ii'm with Ed here, will she hunt the love lorn hero down?
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Brittany, I'm so happy you enjoyed it and really appreciate your kind omment/
DeleteWhile I understand why he's spellbound, I can't wait to see what she does to him! Hahaha
ReplyDeleteLOL Amy, he just can't help himself, can he!
DeleteBusted! Great imagery, Lyn.
ReplyDeleteWhoops! He's caught. The big question is, what will she do? This brings me to mind, a little, of the myth of the man who spied on Artemis bathing.
ReplyDeleteYes, I think you and Ed are thinking along similar lines!
DeleteUh-Oh is all I can say!
ReplyDeleteI think it' all Myrddin can say at the moment, too! :)
DeleteLet's hope he can think fast.
ReplyDeleteYep - some quick thinking is definitely called for!
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