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This snippet starts a few lines from the previous one. Megan and Glyn have become good friends, sharing a common love of animals.Glyn piques Megan's curiosity by hinting that the cottage might be haunted. As you see, if you've been following this from the start, we've sort of come full circle, so I'm going to leave it here - I may post a bit more if I ever get it finished and published.
(This is only a rough draft to give the gist of the novel, and is subject to change and edits - and improvement on the creative punctuation which is needed to adhere to the ten sentence rule!) Any feedback gratefully received.
“As you must be aware, Wales is full of myths and legends, and this area has more than its fair share, and one old tale concerns a young woman called Rhiannon, who lived in this cottage long ago.”
“Go on,” she prompted, as he hesitated once more.
“Apparently,
as well as being the village matchmaker, she also cared for all the
sick and injured animals the villagers brought her. She loved animals
and especially, her little mare, which the villagers whispered, had the
power of flight; others said this was just a rumour put about by folk
with an overactive imagination.
“So what happened to her?” Megan asked.
“Sion
Sienco, a local gypsy, was in love with Rhiannon and forever playing
tricks on her to try to gain her attention, but to start with she would
have nothing to do with him. Sion would do things like causing her milk
cow to go dry, or spiriting away her beloved pony and hiding the animal
in the woods.”
She grinned at him over the rim of her mug. “I’m not surprised she spurned his advances if he did things like that.”
He
smiled ruefully. “I suppose men sometimes do silly things when they’re
in love, and of course it was a very long time ago, and stories become
distorted in the telling."
Show Australia Some Love
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And yet, they haven't learned any better in all the centuries... lol Great snippet, Hywela.
ReplyDeleteTrue! LOL Thanks for visiting, Siobhan.
DeleteI'm not surprised she spurned his advance, either.
ReplyDeleteI am really enjoying this tale, Lyn. I hope you continue writing it! :-)
Thanks Teresa - hoping to finish and have it submitted in the next few months.
DeleteSome would say men do stupid things even when they aren't in love, right?
ReplyDeleteLOL Ed - I couldn't possibly comment! :)
DeleteAs always, I'm enjoying your snippet, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThanks Charmaine, your support means a lot! xx
DeleteIntriguing insight into the earlier match. But Megan and Glyn are still only "good friends". What will bring them closer together?
ReplyDeleteAh, that's the big question, isn't it, Aurora! :)
ReplyDeleteLove the blending timelines and the interplay between your characters. Ordered the Australian Burns Vol 1. Can't wait to read it and support this tragic cause.
ReplyDeleteHi Nancy, glad you enjoyed it - and hope you enjoy Australia Burns too,thanks for buying it, every purchase helps the cause!
ReplyDeleteI loved the snippet as you tell the tale of legends.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Karen!
DeleteI'm not surprised she rejected him- I hope his interest in her didn't take a turn for the worse.
ReplyDeleteNo, she comes to realise his pranks are never meant to hurt or upset her, and always ends up forgiving him.
DeleteEnjoyed the snippet and the legend, although there does seem to be more to be told, which I like.
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica - yes there's a lot more to both the stories of Rhiannon and Sion and Megan and Glyn.
DeleteLoved their teasing back and forth :)
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling,
Yawatta
Thanks so much, Yawatta. Glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteSion reminds me of a young boy trying to get a girl's attention. lol Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane, yes, at the time Sion was a little immature (some lads never really grow up :) ) but he has a good heart.
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