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Last week I introduced Terpsichore, Muse of the Dance. Apollo has commanded her to dance again for him, and has accompanied her on his kithara. However she knows there is something else he wants from her. (Slight rearrangement of punctuation to comply with 10 sentence rule)
Last week I introduced Terpsichore, Muse of the Dance. Apollo has commanded her to dance again for him, and has accompanied her on his kithara. However she knows there is something else he wants from her. (Slight rearrangement of punctuation to comply with 10 sentence rule)
DANCING WITH FATE
The remnants of her song faded and lingered
for a moment in the crystal air. Terpsichore spread her arms in abeyance, then
clasped her fingers in front of her, and stood for a moment in silence. Apollo
slowly lowered his instrument and clapped his hands, smiling and indicating she
should sit beside him. She bent to retrieve her lyre, before seating herself
and gazed at him, trying to hide her curiosity. "You wish something
further of me, my brother?"
"Do you remember a land of mortals—a
small country known as Cymru, the brotherhood, erstwhile called Cambria, or
Wales as some would have it? You may recall the folk who inhabit it, who call
themselves the Keltoi?”
Ah, the Celts. How could she forget them? "I do - they were a fierce and noble race,
with much knowledge of magick and the hidden arts.
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You've intrigued me with this snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jessica, I was hoping to intrigue! :)
DeleteNice little bit of lore. :-)
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter, Hywela. :-)
Thanks Teresa, and I hope you had a very happy Easter too!
DeleteThis development has grabbed me. Your national origins are on full display, Hywela!
ReplyDeleteDiolch yn fawr Ed (Thanks very much) I loved getting back to my roots in this story!
DeleteIntriguing snippet! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Elyzabeth.
DeleteWhat's Apollo want her and the Celts??? Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteMore than he's letting on at the moment, actually Daryl. Thanks for stoppng by and for tweeting.
DeleteEeee Greek lore!!! :D
ReplyDeleteYep, I've actually mixed up my myths a bit in this one! :)
DeleteClearly she enjoyed her previous stay in Wales.
ReplyDeleteShe did,Aurora, although she thought she'd completed her mission there.
DeleteInteresting. I wonder where this is leading ...
ReplyDeleteHi Botanist, yes, that's what Terpsichore is wondering too! :)
DeleteI mean right, really how could anyone forget the Celts!? I like the way Apollo is leading into this, giving his explanation weight and importance with his deliberate word choices...really enjoying the excerpts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica, so glad you're enjoying it!
DeleteIntriguing snippet. Love mythology themed tales. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen, yes mythology can be really interesting, I had such fun doing the research!
DeleteVery intriguing. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Christiane!
ReplyDeleteI smell a mission coming on. I wonder what he's getting to.
ReplyDeleteI think your sense of smell is right on! :)
DeleteInteresting. He's about to ask her to go there, isn't he? :)
ReplyDeleteWell Jennifer - I couldn't possibly answer - you'll just have to wait until next week! :)
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