Hi fellow Snippeteers and readers. Welcome to my Weekend Warriors post and another snippet from my fantasy novella, Dancing With Fate. Thank you to everyone who's been following my snippets so far. Don't forget to visit the other authors at the link below this post, there's something for all tastes.
Last week: Terpsichore, muse of dance, has been given a new mission by Apollo, to restore joy and the love of dancing to the Celts of 5th Century Wales. He warns her that she will have to take the form of a mortal and to be careful not to put herself in danger.
SNIPPET: (Some creative punctuation from published version, to comply with 10 sentence rule.)
What was Apollo
keeping hidden though? She could always tell when he was holding something
back, what had he not told her? Still, he would surely have her best interests
at heart, no doubt, he would reveal it when he judged the time to be right.
She left the
Great Hall through one of the rear doors. Was it her imagination or did she
hear the sound of footsteps, as if someone scurried away down a side corridor?
She glanced around and narrowed her eyes as she saw what looked like a tall
figure slip into the shadows, but she could not be sure. It might just be a
trick of the light, had she imagined the dark form, the glint of torchlight on
metal, gold or perhaps brass? Could someone have been eavesdropping on her
conversation with Apollo? She hurried on silent feet to where she saw the figure
disappear, but there was nothing. Nothing except a prickling at the back of her
neck and the uncomfortable feeling she had not been mistaken.
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Terpsichore and Myrddin face a deadly force that threatens to part them forever. Is she destined to lose the only man she has ever truly loved? Is there nothing she can do to save him? Finally, when all seems lost, in desperation she finds herself DANCING WITH FATE.
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Oh, always trust your gut. I wonder if the eavesdropper will help or hinder her? Nice snippet!
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DeleteThanks Jessica - yes, always trust your gut. Only time will tell if she is right to be concerned!
An immortal muse must have an excellent sense of intuition. So pay heed, Cory!
ReplyDeleteExcellent advice Ed-hope she takes it!
DeleteLove the hint of intrigue in this snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary x
DeleteYou paint a perfect picture the reader can understand and enjoy!
ReplyDeleteAw,thanks so much Charmaine!
DeleteGreat hook!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alexandra
DeleteThat mysterious someone probably knows where she's going and the danger she'll be in. I expect trouble ahead!
ReplyDeleteThere's bound to be trouble! :)
DeleteSounds like her mission is about to get more complicated!
ReplyDeleteThink you're right, Christina
DeleteThat snippet was downright creepy. Good job for making me feel what she feels.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane - glad the creepiness came through.
DeleteSeveral intriguing threads in that snippet. I thought you created the ominous atmosphere very well, with the eavesdropper. and I'm not so sure I'd be as quick to trust Apollo as she is...enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica - in fact she doesn't have a lot of choice - Apollo is the leader of the muses and they are obliged to act on his wishes - he does care about them though, he knows she's capable of fulfilling the mission he's sent her on.
DeleteThat was scary. Lots of emotion here.
ReplyDeleteThanks Elaine, she's right to be nervous!
DeleteTrust those feelings, girl! Nice foreshadowing, Lyn.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nancy!
DeleteI'm curious to know who is following her. You really did a great job with the ominous imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen, that's good to know!
DeleteCan't wait to find out what happens next. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christiane - more next week!
DeleteNice tension development! I want to know. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Teresa!
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