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Sunday 28 July 2019

Weekend Writing Warriors Snippet Sunday - The Matchmaker's Mare

Apologies - it's been a long time since I posted - but I've been busy with my current WIP - a fantasy romance entitled 'The Matchmaker's mare.

I'm going to use it for to my Weekend Warriors post, after quite a while away. This story is told from three p.o.vs. and two time-lines. Today's excerpt is from Rhiannon's p.o.v. and takes place in the distant past. (As usual, cretive punctuation to comply with the 8 sentence rule.)

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Faster Seren, faster.” Leaning low over the pony’s neck the young woman urged her into a mile eating gallop, the mare’s hooves scarcely touching the ground as she appeared to fly across the rugged landscape. If only the pony could really fly, sometimes it felt as if she truly galloped through the air. There was something very special about the filly she’d found as a motherless foal in the mountains and cared for until it was fully grown. She’d named her for the perfect diamond shaped star on her face. Seren needed no breaking in or training, but allowed Rhiannon to sit on her back as soon as she was mature enough to take a rider, although no-one else could ride her, not even Sion Sienco.

“Oh Sion,” she whispered silently. “Sion, where are you when I need you?”

She cast one last swift look over her shoulder at the only home she had known, as the cottage, rapidly receded into the distance,  it melted into the shadows, appearing forlorn in the soft moonlight, almost as if it knew she would never return.


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14 comments:

  1. Welcome back, Hywela. I missed your exceptional snippets. You captured me once again as she rides into possible danger.

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    1. Aw thanks so much Charmaine - it's great to be back!

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  2. Missed you, Hywela! Enjoying the ride and wondering what she's in such a hurry to leave behind . . . or get to.

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    1. Thank you Nancy - I've missed our weekly 'get together' too.

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  3. Welcome back, Hywela. Of course your story features a horse. Of course!

    Galactic Enemy is now off at the editor. Thanks for you help with it.

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    1. But of course, Ed - you know me, all critters great and mall - epecially of the equine persuasion!
      Congrats on Galactic Enemy, I was really happy to be of some small assistance - and looking forward to seeing the published version!

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  4. Happy to see you back! Enjoyed the snippet, was carried along on the horse right with your character because of the lovely prose. And of course now I'm wondering why she has to leave her home...

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    1. Thanks for your lovely comment, Veronica, so glad you enjoyed it!

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  5. Hello and welcome back!
    I liked the idea of wanting to fly away on her mare. But what is she fleeing from?

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    1. Hi Aurora, and thanks for the welcome.
      As for what she's trying to escape from - you'll have to wait until next week to find out :)

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  6. Intriguing! Why is she leaving--what is driving her away. And why is she missing Sion? Who and where is this person? Great hooks!

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    1. Thanks Teresa - some of those questions may be answered next week!

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  7. I felt I was flying with her upon the horse's back.

    Welcome back!

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    1. Thanks so much Karen, glad you enjoyed it!

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