Apologies - it's been a long time since I posted - but I've been busy with my current WIP - a fantasy romance entitled 'The Matchmaker's mare.
I'm going to use it for to my Weekend Warriors post, after quite a while away. This story is told from three p.o.vs. and two time-lines. Today's excerpt is from Rhiannon's p.o.v. and takes place in the distant past. (As usual, cretive punctuation to comply with the 8 sentence rule.)
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I'm going to use it for to my Weekend Warriors post, after quite a while away. This story is told from three p.o.vs. and two time-lines. Today's excerpt is from Rhiannon's p.o.v. and takes place in the distant past. (As usual, cretive punctuation to comply with the 8 sentence rule.)
Don't forget to visit the other authors at the link below, there's something for all tastes.
“Faster Seren, faster.” Leaning
low over the pony’s neck the young woman urged her into a mile eating gallop,
the mare’s hooves scarcely touching the ground as she appeared to fly across
the rugged landscape. If only the pony could really fly, sometimes it felt as
if she truly galloped through the air. There was something very special about
the filly she’d found as a motherless foal in the mountains and cared for until
it was fully grown. She’d named her for
the perfect diamond shaped star on her face. Seren needed no breaking in or training, but allowed Rhiannon to sit on her
back as soon as she was mature enough to take a rider, although no-one else
could ride her, not even Sion Sienco.
“Oh Sion,” she whispered silently. “Sion, where are you when I need you?”
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Welcome back, Hywela. I missed your exceptional snippets. You captured me once again as she rides into possible danger.
ReplyDeleteAw thanks so much Charmaine - it's great to be back!
DeleteMissed you, Hywela! Enjoying the ride and wondering what she's in such a hurry to leave behind . . . or get to.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nancy - I've missed our weekly 'get together' too.
DeleteWelcome back, Hywela. Of course your story features a horse. Of course!
ReplyDeleteGalactic Enemy is now off at the editor. Thanks for you help with it.
But of course, Ed - you know me, all critters great and mall - epecially of the equine persuasion!
DeleteCongrats on Galactic Enemy, I was really happy to be of some small assistance - and looking forward to seeing the published version!
Happy to see you back! Enjoyed the snippet, was carried along on the horse right with your character because of the lovely prose. And of course now I'm wondering why she has to leave her home...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your lovely comment, Veronica, so glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteHello and welcome back!
ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of wanting to fly away on her mare. But what is she fleeing from?
Hi Aurora, and thanks for the welcome.
DeleteAs for what she's trying to escape from - you'll have to wait until next week to find out :)
Intriguing! Why is she leaving--what is driving her away. And why is she missing Sion? Who and where is this person? Great hooks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Teresa - some of those questions may be answered next week!
DeleteI felt I was flying with her upon the horse's back.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!
Thanks so much Karen, glad you enjoyed it!
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