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Beloved Enemy joined Starquest and Children of the Mist to continue the Destiny Trilogy and I'm thrilled to announce was shortlisted for the R.N.A. RoNA Awards 2017, awarded 2nd Runner up in the RONE Awards 2017 and was the winner in the SF/Fantasy category of the 'Best Banter Contest'.

Sunday, 10 December 2017

#WeWriWar, Sunday Snippets: Beloved Enemy - Cat needs to find out what's going on


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Here's the second snippet from the third book in the Destiny Trilogy. Thanks so much to everyone who has been following this series, and left comments xx


You can read the previous snippet of  Beloved Enemy HERE


Specially for Ed!
She listened for a moment to confirm the direction of the firing. It came from somewhere beyond the rim of the sandy cliff behind her. It took several minutes to scramble to the top of the slope and peer cautiously above the edge.

The battle sounded closer now, coming from the other side of several low dunes looming before her. She bent low against a scorching wind that lashed the sand around her into swirling eddies. She cursed as it snatched several long strands of her hair from the scarf that struggled to restrain it at the nape of her neck. Like a dark red mist, the unbound hair whipped across her face, blurring her vision. She brushed it back, with a few more muttered words of annoyance. As she reached the top of another low hillock, the sky lit up with a scintillating green light and the sound of the weapons almost deafened her. Her fingers tightened on her laser pistol, and throwing herself to the ground, she inched her way to a group of thorny bushes for cover.

BLURB

Cat Kincaid is obsessed with killing the man she believes is responsible for the torture and death of her sister, but when she eventually catches up with him, survival becomes a greater priority than revenge.

Kerry Marchant, haunted by memories, regret, and self-blame, shields himself from the pain of the past by committing himself totally to the starship, Destiny, of which he is part owner. However, the beautiful, red-haired woman who reminds him of his lost love, and who he suspects is working for a corrupt regime, represents a possible threat not only to the ship, but to his heart.

Marooned on an inhospitable planet, they need to work together to stay alive, fighting not only unknown assailants, but their growing attraction. But how can they learn to trust each other when he has vowed never to get close to a woman again, and she made a solemn pledge to destroy him?





THE DESTINY TRILOGY



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28 comments:

  1. A very intense situation for her. I hope she gets to her destination without too much harm.

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    1. Thanks Jessica, though Cat does have a habit of jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!

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  2. I hope the thorny little bush provides enough cover!

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    1. Well there's quite a thicket of them, so hopefully she'll be OK. Ed.

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    2. And, uh, why is the Welcome to Hell sign specially for me? Is this your way of telling me where to go?

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    3. Lol Ed, 'course not, you know I love you! But last week you said the thing missing from the graphic I used was as sign saying 'Welcome to Hell' (Because of the smell of sulphur etc.) so I thought I'd do one! :)

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  3. Vivid description of the wind and the issues with her hair! A nice touch...can't wait to learn more about this battle she's sneaking up on. Great snippet...

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    1. Thanks Veronica, glad you enjoyed this bit - Cat has very unruly hair and the Robigan wind doesn't help at all! :)

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  4. Great line Hywela ."She cursed as it snatched several long strands of her hair from the scarf that struggled to restrain it at the nape of her neck. " theglobaldig.blogspot.com

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  5. Wonderfully descriptive. My favorite line was "Like a dark red mist, the unbound hair whipped across her face, blurring her vision." Fabulous!

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    1. Thanks Jenna - I was trying to find a way of showing she had red hair, without 'telling' the reaader. Glad it seems to have worked.

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  6. Nice scene, Lyn! Visual and . . . gritty.

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  7. Good descriptions of the setting. Curious to find out what's going on over there.

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    1. Thanks Botanist - I think Cat is about to find out!

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  8. wonderful description. Felt like I was there.

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  9. That's a great description. You definitely put us in the scene.

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    1. Thanks Christiane. I enjoyed writing this scene!

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  11. Great descriptive scene. Intense.

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  12. That is NOT a good time to be fighting with her hair. Makes me hope she gets everything under control soon. Lots of good details to pump up the tension!

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